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One day I'll START a story with shagging. If I'm ever that good of a writer my brain my implode, though.

 

Haha, you could do it like the bit in Mars Attacks where they're shagging in the trailer and the martians are looking thoruhg the window with windscreen wipers clearing their visors as they pant.

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I now have visions of full auto furiously scribbling an energetic shag in the skyranger toilets just before the drop zone!

 

"The shudder of the engines switching to vtol mode matched the quaking of her thighs as she neared her peak. The vehicle slowed to commence its descent, whilst their motion became more furious, pushing together harder, deeper, willing themselves to climax before the drop ramp opened."
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