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My post is imminent...

 

Vet, I've written in John O'Malley in place of "Carl" Hiller in my post, would you mind editing yours to suit? Also Donovan is in Green fireteam as tail-end charlie position.

 

edit - thanks vet - post is up.

And thanks to Hankosha for privately agreeing to let me explode a character of his into smithereens.

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No problem JFish. I forgot to edit it what wiht four missing fingers and all :) They're all in working order again now though so I'll o it now :)

 

EDIT: I also changed their orientation based on what you wrote a while back JFish. You said Green fireteam was rightside so they're now working up the eastern border as opposed to along the southern...

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hey mind if i throw in a character into the UFO fanfic? might need some help with details but i should be good, already read it and stuff. its awesome :) i just dont know alot of technical stuff of the actual game. as i have yet to play it :) but i shall soon remedy that once i have the money and visit e-bay :) anyways im ready to write the character anytime just need some confirmation from somebody. its gonna be based almost completely on my type thing i just have to figure out how a person like me would be in x-com...
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For continuity's sake, we'd better get the mission completed and back to base before introducing any more new characters. Go ahead and manipulate the existing characters, it's a fic not a sim. I'll have to write for other people's characters now anyway that I've killed off my contribution to squad one. But I'm not planning to kill off anyone else, other than aliens.
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Like Vet said, COME ON! There's a story to tell and I don't want to post right after Snickers because I posted right before.

 

If this goes anything like my games more soldiers are going to die, but I suppose it's possible we've seen the last of the casualties.

 

XCOM: wounded 1 or 2, dead 2

Aliens: dead 2 (probably only 2 or 3 to go - of which 2 in the UFO itself)

 

PS. If we do capture the UFO power source intact - no imbalance to plot - we're still researching laser weapons and can't afford the scientists to research the power source until much later anyway.

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Deadly stuff, guys. My post is imminent (and then I'm off on a week's vacation).

 

NB. Snikers on July 17 had an alien pointing its rifle "at an inferior being for the second time that day" when it shoots O'Malley, we are to presume the first time was Jennings. Donovan dispatches this alien. Terrick dispatches a second sniper.

 

So to move forward with any consistency, the alien Jennings has just spotted is actually a different (third) alien.

 

EDIT: I have somewhat more to say, namely Warlord is called to aid Rick by clearing the brush with HE, then Rick gets the kill; Kitat and Donovan can take the right (east) flank as a new Green team, and Ki-tat has agreed to be the first to open the UFO and take a few shots from the two aliens remaining inside, ending up wounded, even unconscious, but not dead. Write some of it yourselves if you're inspired, otherwise I'll try again tomorrow.

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This should have only taken a week or so to write but noone is posting. Everyone is using the old 'my soldier isn't there' excuse. It doesn't matter! Just post for god sake! Actually Spaceman... I don't remember seeing a post from you in this battle... Maybe you should spend your effort doing that instead of complaining that noone else is... :hmmm:
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I'm posting this from Malta - on vacation this week. I hope to see a new post from someone else when I get back :) what's your excuse?

 

JFG

 

EDIT: And I'm back...:) I'll prepare a post for next week (13th Oct) unless someone says "Hang on, I'm in the middle of writing one" and/or posts before then. In which case I'll gladly modify mine to agree with their events.

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ahhh... I'm back. Sorry for the lengthy absence, things have been hellaciously difficult for me these last few months and it doesn't look like it is going to ease up. :hmmm: However, I think I'll be able to squeeze 'some' writing time in. :) Jelly, could you email me and give me a quick synopsis as to what is going on in the fic?

 

-Rasicar

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4 Squads initially:

 

Blue: Jack Thomas ("Warlord")

Tamara Hillard ("Tammy")

Tim Day

 

Gold: Ed Dodge

Martin Terrick ("Strike")

 

Red: Bob Jennings

Rick Chez

Ki-Tat Chung

 

Green: Shuwei Chen

Jack Donovan

John O'Malley

 

Gold scouts ahead, Blue follows

 

Red and Green go left and right.

 

Red encounters first alien (Alien#1). Alien takes first shot, and grazes Jennings. Returned fire, but alien gets away. Non-lethal burns on Jennings.

Martin reassigned to Blue team (Blue-4)Ed sent back to skyranger to guard Doc(Pilot)

 

Green encounters alien#1. Alien#1 fires shot at O'Malley. O'Malley's arm shot off, and cauterized. Green team returns fire. Alien hides, then throws grenade. O'Malley jumps on grenade, and is killed. Shuwei and Donovan take cover. Shuwei sustains injuries from blast debris. Donovan throws a grenade, and flushes alien towards Shuwei. Shuwei is hit in chest with alien weaponry, but brings down the alien with rifle fire. (Kill: Shuwei Chen) Alien weaponry inflicted fatal injuries. Donovan under fire from new alien, Alien#2.

 

Terrick sent to give Green-2 cover.

(Gold fireteam unofficially dissolved due to nobody within it.)

Donovan spots UFO hull.

 

Donovan dodges fire from Alien#2. Terrick moves into position and kills Alien#2 with rifle. (Confirmed Kill: Martin Terrick)

 

Apparantly Ki-tat leaves red fireteam and is now in position with Green-2 and Blue-4 (Donovan and Terrick)

 

Red team (Minus Ki-tat) head for UFO.

Red team spots new alien, Alien#3, and engages. .

 

All of Blue team is now rendevouzed in the clearing with Green-2. Shuwei dies )(Medical Assistance too late

 

Red team leader requests Blue-1 to provide AC-HE fire support (due to tactical deployment of troops on the map). Alien#3 exposes it's position, and is killed by Rick.

(Confirmed kill for Rick Chez.)

 

All fireteams move toward spotted UFO.

 

Warlord and Tim scout around field for remaining aliens.

 

Ki-tat examines UFO door. Door opens seemingly automatically. Two aliens inside, Alien # 4 and Alien # 5. Ki-tat fires inside, but hits nothing. The two aliens fire on Ki-tat, and result in hits. Jennings throws a primed grenade inside, and the UFO door closes.

 

While Tammy gives medical assistance to Ki-tat, Rick, Terrick, Donovan, and Jennings watch the door. Warlord and Tim return from scouting and pronounce the area secure.

 

Tim and Terrick move up to door, and open it. Alien#4 and Alien#5 are neutralized. (Either dead or unconcious). (Unconfirmed Kill: Bob Jennings)

 

The rest of UFO is secure. Alien#5 is not dead, merely unconcious. Alien is bound up and put into custody. Mission pronounced over.

 

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Ending Situation:

 

Fireteams:

Blue: Jack Thomas (Commander)

Tamara Hillard (Medic)

Tim Day

Martin Terrick (Kills: 1 (1 rifle))

 

Green: Shuwei Chen(Dead: Shot by alien weaponry.) Kills: 1

John O'Malley (Dead: Self-sacrifice on alien grenade. No body to return. .)

Jack Donovan

 

Red: Rick O'Chez.(Kills: 1 rifle)

Bob Jennings (Kills: 1 grenade)

Ki-tat Chung (Wounded)

 

Gold: (Dissolved)

 

Ed Dodge provided Skyranger Security.

 

Mission Results:

 

Aliens Killed by X-COM Operatives:..........5
X-COM Operatives Killed by Aliens:..........2
X-COM Operatives Wounded in Action:.........1
Live Aliens Recovered:......................1
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Recovery:
Fully functional, intact UFO Recovered.
4 Alien corpses.
1 Captured Alien.
Several Alien Artefacts carried by Aliens, including weapons and grenades.
-Preliminary analasis:
+5 Alien weapons
+4 Alien grenades
+9 Unknown Objects

 

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W00t! Colour pwnage! :)

 

There. I think that's everything that happened right now.

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